Silent Ninja – A short film shot in the wilderness of Duluth

This was originally going to be a web-series but I managed to recut everything and make a much more concise and hopefully entertaining short film.

Enjoy!

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Dorkus

about 12 years ago

Good to see you are still making the films. 

Some constructive criticism... The pace is awfully slow, especially at the beginning. Just like when you are writing a short story, you need to have something that grabs the viewer right away. A hook, as it were. Too slow at the beginning and people are likely to go to the next video. 

You also might want to consider taking some martial arts classes. Nothing in-depth, but some Wing-chun hand trapping and some Kali siniwali drills are easy enough to learn quickly and will add some realism to these videos.

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